Improved Productivity Part 3

Alternate Universe Girlfriend: Part 3 - Girl Talk

Original Concept and Artwork: Steamrolled
Script and Graphic Manipulations: yotelex

This is an alternative version of New Girlfriend with Ray Gun (think of it as a tribute to the creation by Steamrolled). Make sure you read her new series as well as the original Crazy Girlfriend with Remote series.

If you're thinking that "Cupcakes" is a typo in the above episode, it isn't. If you check where Eve is looking, that might give you a clue why she called Elliot "her little cupcakes" and not "her little cupcake". Elliot on the other hand didn't seem to notice the distinction, maybe he was more concerned about being called a cupcake in the first place.

Hopefully, the sequence of text bubbles isn't too confusing. The general rule is that you should read them from top to bottom in all cases. I did rework certain elements of the script as I originally had the text a bit more raunchier than it is now, I'm still unsure of the acceptable limits here at dA but I hope the existing script is OK.

I would love to hear story related discussion. Please comment if you want to make suggestions, give feedback or make criticism on the story. I look forward to reading them as I would be interested to hear new ideas and different views.

Warning
This story and art contains sexual content and mature themes. It's also originally based on a transgender storyline.

Story Background
We have now progressed to week 5 of the relationship between Eve and Elliot.

The previous week, Elliot discovered he was pregnant with Eve's baby. Despite being unsure how she would react to the knowledge of his pregnancy, he decides to break the news. While their relationship was still relatively new, only a matter of weeks, he knew that they had developed serious feelings for each other over this short period of time. To Elliot's amazement, and to Eve's credit, she enthusiastically proposed to him on the spot.

Not that Elliot being in the family way was the main reason Eve proposed. Even before the news she knew she loved him and wanted Elliot to be her wife. She had already spent her newly earned work bonus in putting down a deposit on an engagement ring. She had planned to propose to Elliot the following month, on his 25th birthday, but his announcement seemed too good an opportunity to miss so she decided to pop the question there and then. Eve knows she will love her new wife with all her heart, now as a bonus she'll be a proud father as well as a loving husband to her beautiful blushing bride.

There is still the question of the date of the wedding. Eve suggests Elliot's 25th birthday as the big day, perhaps spurred on due to her desire to see Elliot in a wedding dress as soon as possible. Elliot does want to get married before the baby is born and before his tummy starts to show signs of his pregnancy, so the earlier the better. In the back of his mind, he does wonder if the suggestion of making the wedding day the same as his birthday is simply a ploy of Eve's so she won't have to remember both their Wedding Anniversary and his birthday.

Not related to the happy news, a couple of other facts begin to emerge. First, Eve loves to tease her boyfriend and will do so at any opportunity, including the use of embarrassing pet names for him. Second, it seems that Elliot likes to be spanked.

Eve at least has an excuse for her fondness of pet names. It's become a tradition within her family to use weird pet names, her mother's grandparents come from Europe, her grandma is French and her grandpa is from England. Grandpa calls grandma "petit pois" for example (pronounced "petty pwah", that's "garden pea" or "green pea", the French use unusual pet names to say the least). Anyway, shouldn't it be "petite pois"?

As for Elliot's fondness for being spanked, well, it's best to keep some secrets! Eve revels in this discovery, while she's no real dominatrix, she does like the idea of putting her boyfriend across her knee and giving him a damn good spanking whenever she pleases! Of course, while he's pregnant, she will be gentler but that won't stop the spankings if she has any say in the matter (and she does).