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Improved Productivity Part 2

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Alternate Universe Girlfriend: Part 2

Initial Concept and Original Art: Steamrolled
Script and Graphic Manipulations: yotelex

This is an alternative version of New Girlfriend with Ray Gun (think of it as a tribute to the creation by Steamrolled). Make sure you read her new series as well as the original Crazy Girlfriend with Remote series.

The events above in AUGF part 2 take place four weeks after Eve and Elliot meet. My storyline will start to diverge from the original but at the moment it still follows the events that happened in Crazy Girlfriend with Remote (CGFwR) and page 1 of New Girlfriend with Ray Gun (NGFwRG). I suspect that the story will start to branch immediately once Steamrolled releases new material.

Warning
This story and art contains sexual content and mature themes. It's also originally based on a transgender storyline.

Story Background
Elliot has now moved in with Eve and they are happily living together. As depicted in part 16 of CGFwR, Elliot has broken up with Emily and has moved out of the apartment they once shared. He hopes that Emily is out of his life altogether.

Elliot was originally born male and for the first 24 years of his life, he lived a pretty normal life. Thanks to his crazy ex-girlfriend Emily, he now looks and acts like a female but he (and nearly everyone else) considers him to be male.

In general, other females in this reality would view and treat him as females in our reality would treat someone who looks like Tom Cruise. Elliot looks female but is generally considered hunky and a real stud, remember, his looks don't make him female.

On the flip-side, females in this reality don't actually find him sexually attractive. They might well consider him to be a hunk but never the less they don't find him "sexy". The reason is not because he looks female (in this reality, the looks do not suggest the gender), the reason is simply because has a vagina instead of a penis.

Eve on the other hand, does find him "sexy". She sees Elliot to be a real hunk (just as most other females do) but thanks to the fact she has a penis instead of a vagina, she is sexually attracted to him. Elliot also has a number of other features that makes Eve drool over him (i.e. he has a big rack, auburn hair, an ideal personality, and so on).

For Eve, while most men in this reality would find her to be a well built attractive blonde, they would not find her "sexy" either, in the same way most heterosexual men wouldn't find Tom Cruise to be sexy (because both Tom Cruise and Eve have a penis).

So bottom line, Eve and Elliot are almost built for each other!

In any of this doesn't make sense, please post and ask questions and I'll do my best to explain it further :D Also post if you want to make suggestions, comments, or criticism on the story as I would like to read them (note: I might not take any notice of them but all the same, I would be interested to hear new ideas). I have the general storyline worked out for the long term, in the short term I have a number of new episodes ready to release (but I'll limit them to be released once a week). Progress will also depend on new material released by Steamrolled which I hope will continue as I really have enjoyed what has been released so far!

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NatalieRath's avatar
<3 <3 I must know more to come!